yeah- the wings are nice, blah blah blah- I love this piece, but you need to be taken down a peg.
So... feathers too unifrom. Words too screamy. hard manage. perhaps one more colour in the speakers of the radio?
And that's all cause you called me a Noob. Whereas we all know that I pwn you. Noob.
Hmm defently not the best but to be honest people like manga (anime?) espicialy ones with wings and rock music/ stuff. Mayby thats why people like it so much????????????
So... feathers too unifrom. Words too screamy. hard manage. perhaps one more colour in the speakers of the radio?
And that's all cause you called me a Noob. Whereas we all know that I pwn you. Noob.
FEATHERS ARE INDEED 2 UNIFORM. I LEARN FROM THAT AND NOT MAKE SAME MISTAKE TWISE.
SCREAMY WORDS? MAYBE THEY DONT GO WITH THE MORE SUBDUED TONE OF THE SONG. THEY ARE, HOWEVER, SUPPOSED TO BE DYNAMIC LIKE THAT.
AN YUS, SPEAKERS DONT EXACTLY SCREAM FOR ATTENTION. COLOR MIGHT HAV HELPED.
THANKS FOR THE HARD CRITIQUE MUCHES. WHEN DID I CALL U A N00B THO? REGARDLESS I R PWNED.
THANKS FOR UR FAIR OPINION. IT IS CLEARLY PRETTY GOOD. I WILL DO BETTER OYEZ.
NAW THEYLIEK IT B/C I GIV THEM FIVE COMMENTS FOR EVERY COMMENT THEY DROP HERE. FORUMTHREAD.
ANYWAY I APPRECIATE UR HONESTY GOODSR.
GREATHNKU.